Yea!! It's the time everyone has been waiting for. I even got a call from Oprah asking if I have chosen the winner (she's just jealous, you know). It's time to give away Golden Llamas!!
Not so fast. This post won't actually award the GLA, but instead gives you all of the haikus in their glory (you are just going to have to wait, Oprah). I am going to award GLA's in a separate post so I can drag this out as long as possible.
Since there were a lot of them (31, to be exact), I broke the haikus down into categories. Plus, I just like bossing around poetry. So here they are:
Category 1: Reform - I originally asked for just haikus on this, but then I chickened out. Here are the entries that actually followed my instructions:
1. Hillary Gorman Israeli
our healthcare system is on a ventilator should we pull the tube?
RL: Excellent poem tying reform to the practice of medicine!
2, 3. Jacqueline Limpens - (Jacqueline wrote a whole post inspired by this contest! She included several entries on Facebook)
Web 2 point ooh tools, Might help to reform health care. Change needs people 2
RL: Clever play on words numbers.
Health Care Reform. An unaffordable plan? A matter of choice.
RL: Referring to the abortion debate?
4. George Bennie
funny 'bout reform it is health's new social norm though it causes storms
RL: Note that haikus don't have to rhyme (although there are no points taken off if they do). This one pulls off the haiku, rhyme, and gives a cogent message.
5. Jenni Smith
The leaves are changing Healthcare is being reformed Hell just froze over
RL: I think it's premature to say Hell froze over; it's just a high-pressure system that's stalled out over purgatory.
6. Leigh Rhiannon Saint-louis
can't afford health care. and can't move to canada. situation: cold.
RL: Excellent. Perhaps the high-pressure system is over Manitoba.
7. Mary Ellen
Healthcare like Haiku law bound and bureaucratic theories change, rules same
RL: I am very impressed at putting reform into haiku and haiku into reform. Say hi to John Boy.
8. Amy Larsen
sad to be sick now complicated costly Please help us Dr. Spock!
RL: I am not vulcan.
9. Gina Rybolt
Ah, healthcare reform I know little about this Thus ends this haiku
RL: That's kind of cheating, isn't it? Just saying "healthcare reform" doesn't get you in!
9A. Jennifer Dumford
Healthcare reform: porn You know it when you see it But can't define it
RL: I left this one out in my first draft of this post. It's really good too. My goof...
Medical Life - When a lot of medical people write poems, there will inevitably be a bunch about what they do all day.
10. Jacqueline Limpens
Dark when he leaves home, Dark when he returns from work. Resident Life.
RL: Yep. That nails it!
11. Kim McAllister
What is the problem? Internet search for data. Holistic hokum.
RL: Kim gets points for saying "Holistic Hokum." That just sounds good when you say it out loud.
12. Ramona Bates - Ramona did her own post inspired by this contest.
Vase broken, skin cut Glue repairs grandma's treasures Blue vase, baby's cheek
RL: Baby and vase are both grandma's treasures. To those who don't know, glue is sometimes used to repair lacerations in children (although I prefer duct tape).
13. Jenni Smith
Avoid disaster Medical billing software Gets you paid faster
RL: You should write jingles, Jenni.
14. Neil Bonginkosi Lawrence Taverner
all bleeding does stop better if the heart does not tie that sucker off!
RL: Bongi is always brilliant (except when it comes to capitalization) and doesn't lower standards on this one.
15. Gina Rybolt
Epi, Levophed I expertly titrate these 'Cuz I am your nurse
RL: Epi and levophed are medications used in the ICU to keep people alive. This captures the day-to-day life of an ICU nurse.
16, 17. Medrecgal
I’m just a coder Giving providers headaches But not on purpose
In the hospital I’ve seen both perspectives Patient and coder
RL: Good pair of haikus about medical coding, a subject that got me on NPR! The first one sounds like an apology.
Slogging through the fluff Battle for best DRG Code the chicken scratch
RL: Good reference to a previous post of mine (Fluff Kills) and a nice haiku to boot!
Blatant Groveling - I have previously made it clear that one way to get a GLA is to beg for it or try to bribe me. I am not above giving things t0 people who go out of their way to butter me up. I like butter. I take it along with my Lipitor every day.
19. Tara Scheck
Distractible Mind If you send me llama hair I will knit you socks.
RL: Tara - the award is a JPG file that has no hair. Sorry. I need more socks.
2o. Ken O
Haiku contest is ending Dr Rob is drinking beer Return of Llamatron*
* Llamatron is an 8-bit computer game, published by Jeff Minter’s Llamasoft company in the UK, back in the 1980s.
RL: Kudos to Ken for introducing my readers to the Llamatron. You only get that kind of thing here, folks.
21. Peggy, RN
Dr. Rob, cool dude Llamas, aardvarks and haiku Poetic & odd
RL: Blatant, over the top and...well, thanks! "Poetic and Odd" may end up as my life purpose.
Opinionated - Some folks couldn't keep from voicing strong opinion, and I am fine with this. It makes me diaphoretic and a bit nauseated to voice my opinions like they do, but it's OK to have opinions (as long as they don't disagree with mine in some pea-brained way). I won't comment on them because...uh, my hands shake too much when I try.
22. Jacqueline Limpens
One trillion for war. The poor denied insurance. U.S. Death Panel.
23. Susan Schwartz
Let's hope the Senate Can help defeat this outrage. Go, Joe Lieberman!
Humorous - Humor is something I am vaguely familiar with. Once I had my third beer, I laughed hard at the following haikus:
24. #1 Dinosaur
*Yawn* Been there, done that. Didn’t I win this last year? (Thanks for the llama.)
RL: Dino's haiku won her a GLA and is proudly posted on the front page of this blog for all to see. She is getting pretty cocky, though. I hope I don't get that smug when I write my book.
WORK for the Llama? No one ever told me THAT. Thinking of haiku
RL: Kim captures the essence of writing something that basically says nothing. That is a staple of this blog.
Huh? - Finally is a group of haikus that made me scratch my head. I have a feeling it has to do with the density of the skull under my itch, but I just had a hard time figuring them out.
26. Catherine Fairchild Calhoun
If you give away the milk for free who will buy the cow (and llama).
RL: This was inspired by this article in the NY times. I think I am just being dense on this one, so can you please explain?
27. Lael Stimers Beckwith
I don't want to pay More than healthcare costs because The "Man" can't keep track.
RL: I guess I would understand it better if I knew who the "Man" is. Is it Richard Simmons?
28. Tanja Cilia
Snake oil, fish livers; Antibiotics, asp'rin..?. One and the same thing!
RL: I actually understand this one...I think. I just wonder about telling a doctor that antibiotics and aspirin are like snake oil.
29. Catherine Fairchild Calhoun
When strangers in O Canada offer to home my sick son think hcrwtf.
RL: Catherine's son BB has a chronic genetic disorder. I understand this one perfectly. I just don't quite know how to pronounce that last word.
30. Leslie Brockway
Stop the wastefulness While jobs lost not an issue Feds might hire one more
RL: Hire one more? Which one? I probably shouldn't have had that third beer.
31. Cerulean Bill
Smiling politicos promise , The Grim Reaper cares Not.
RL: Perhaps the people in Cerulea have different rules about haiku, but this one goes 8-6-1 (which I think was the record of the Chicago Bears last year).
32. Jonathan Lamberts
Healthcare reform is good for the people and stuff. Llama llama yay.
RL: I don't know who this Jonathan person is, but he seems quite the scholar. I am sure he's doing quite well in college (He had better be).
That's all of them. Let me know what you think and if you are in the "Huh" category, please help me. This shows that I am clearly writing up to my readers, as they are quite smart and talented people.
Thanks to all who participated!